2.1.6.2 “The latency of forecasts should be limited by the forecast data sources, with typical cadence of once per 30 or 60 minutes.” What is the rationale for 30-60 mins (is this based on historical data). Is 30-60 mins in conflict with the definition of “normal” for the rest of the section
2.1.6.2.3, 2.1.6.2.4, 2.1.6.2.6 (e.g. Precipitable Water Vapor) are these data available based on current instrumentation
2.1.6.3.3 “Specification: The external wind speed, direction, RMS and peak values, and the dome interior
wind speed, shall be available to the Scheduler. Input latency – urgent.” what do we mean by urgent
2.1.6.4.2 All-sky Sky brightness. Same comment as above (0.1 mag rms does not seem feasible given current models so we need to understand want drives this requirement). If we normalize the sky model to camera data what is the rms
2.1.6.4.3 All-sky Transparency. Same as above 0.05 mag rms and 30 arcmin resolution needs justifying as it doesnt seem possible with current systems
2.2.4 Survey progress Add effective exposure time to the metric
2.3.4.3 The rank equations should be listed as an “example” of a simplified version
2.5.2 we say transfer of algorithms is required but not transfer of code (between opsim and the scheduler). I can see a reason that you might want to fall back to the algorithm transfer but I think we should have as the primary requirement that the code be transferable (not clear what an algorithm module is)